Sploosh

In Room One we have been reading a book called Holes. In Holes there is a scene where Zero has escaped Camp Green Lake and found a boat tipped upside down with a bunch of spiced peaches in tight jars. When Zero found them he called them Sploosh. Mrs Naden asked us to make an advertisement for Sploosh. We had to add a celebrity endorsement, a price, where you can buy it from, a slogan and it had to be eye catching and colourful. I enjoyed finding the different types of peach pictures. I didn't find anything hard. Next time I would add where you can buy it from.

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  1. Kia ora Daisy,
    Your advert is very eye-catching. Which celebrity could endorse Sploosh? Can you think of a slogan for Sploosh?
    Mā te wā,
    Mrs Naden

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  2. Konichiwa Daisy
    Your Sploosh advertisement was nice and persuasive and feel as if I would like some now.
    Next time maybe you could make the writing under Sploosh a bit bigger.
    Did you come up up with the recipe on your own?
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    Sayonara
    Catalina

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  3. Ki or ana Daisy, your sploosh google drawing was so cool. I really liked how you told me how to make it. Maybe next time you could check for spelling. please check out my blog https://saintmarysgisisabelleh.blogspot.com/

    Ma te wa
    Isabelle

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