Autumn

We are learning to use describing words. We are learning to use specific nouns, adjectives, juicy verbs and similes.
I enjoyed writing about all the different colours.
I found it tricky to use a simile.

Outside leaves wave wild flying through the colourful trees,then land flat on the ground.The grass is wet mushy and bitter on my feet. When I run through the grass wet cold dirt flies everywhere.The wind is heavy on my back and freezing on my fingertips.

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